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Bara-Bara no Mi Empty Bara-Bara no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Feb 26, 2017 6:22 am

Bara Bara no Mi


Devil Fruit: Chop-Chop Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: Bara-Bara no Mi Latest?cb=20130522004613
Devil Fruit Description: Turns the user into a "splitting human" allowing them to split any limb of their body and fly them around except the feet.

Essentially, the user can fly any splitted limb excluding the feet around a limited distance, the feet however cannot fly at all and act as an anchor for the other limbs flying around.

Other then that, the user is given standard weakness's, weak to seastone, drowns in the sea etc.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: The user is immune to sword attacks such as stabbing and slashing, the cutted limb will only split which will allow the user to put back the splitted limb. However, this doesn't apply if the sword has seastone or infused with Busoshoku Haki.

Fighting Style: Bara-Bara Black Claw Style
Weapon Utilization: the current user, Chuck uses Black Claw's in association with the powers of the chop-chop fruit
Specialization: The devil fruit is mixed in close range and long range, since the user can split body parts and fly them around to attack their opponent.
Description: Chuck uses the powers of the chop-chop fruit in association with his Black Claws and Bladed Boots, his Black Claw is usually only good for up-close combat but thanks to the powers of the fruit, he can extend upon this range greatly


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:



Last edited by Chucky on Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:48 pm; edited 3 times in total
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 11:20 am
Your techniques are almost good to go, Chuck, except for one important misunderstanding. The technique levels are not determined by your character's level. They're determined by which level you get those techniques at. So, you should have the following levels for techniques:

Light: Two level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Medium: One level 1, one level 5, one level 20
Heavy: One level 1, one level 10
AOE: One level 1, one level 20

And the technique range is determined by the technique's level, not the characters. So, a level 1 technique would have a maximum range of 10m while the maximum range of a level 5 technique would be 50m.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:13 pm
Edits made
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3844

Bara-Bara no Mi Empty Re: Bara-Bara no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:32 pm
For Bara-Bara Black Whirlwind (the level 1 AOE), you've worded your description to suggest that the radius of the technique is 5m. It can only be a maximum of 2.5m.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:44 pm
You mis-read it? it's range is 5m, but the radius of the technique which is 25% of what 5m is, which is 1.25

EDIT: NVM! I see what you mean haha, not the actual set values but the actual description itself, my bad I'll fix it.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:49 pm
Okay! sorry about the above, it's been properly fixed now.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3844

Bara-Bara no Mi Empty Re: Bara-Bara no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:49 pm
"Chuck splits his hands and then the left hand goes 5 metres away from Chuck, then the right hand goes 5 metres away to the other side, and they start spinning around in that 5 metre circle, hitting anybody who is close." The bolded bit suggests that you're hitting everything within that 5-metre circle. Otherwise, why even spread out your hands 5 meters apart? "Hitting anybody who is close" does not specify any range, so it only makes sense for the reader to assume that by "close", you mean anyone within that 5-meter circle.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3844

Bara-Bara no Mi Empty Re: Bara-Bara no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Feb 27, 2017 3:50 pm
Now all you need is a red nose and a killer laugh!

Bara-Bara no Mi Fdzj9w
Chucky wrote:

Bara Bara no Mi


Devil Fruit: Chop-Chop Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: Bara-Bara no Mi Latest?cb=20130522004613
Devil Fruit Description: Turns the user into a "splitting human" allowing them to split any limb of their body and fly them around except the feet.

Essentially, the user can fly any splitted limb excluding the feet around a limited distance, the feet however cannot fly at all and act as an anchor for the other limbs flying around.

Other then that, the user is given standard weakness's, weak to seastone, drowns in the sea etc.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: The user is immune to sword attacks such as stabbing and slashing, the cutted limb will only split which will allow the user to put back the splitted limb. However, this doesn't apply if the sword has seastone or infused with Busoshoku Haki.

Fighting Style: Bara-Bara Black Claw Style
Weapon Utilization: the current user, Chuck uses Black Claw's in association with the powers of the chop-chop fruit
Specialization: The devil fruit is mixed in close range and long range, since the user can split body parts and fly them around to attack their opponent.
Description: Chuck uses the powers of the chop-chop fruit in association with his Black Claws and Bladed Boots, his Black Claw is usually only good for up-close combat but thanks to the powers of the fruit, he can extend upon this range greatly


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

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